What I’ve been doing with my widdle self

Cutting 50% of Avalon Burning. Most pages look like this:

BEFORE

The revised page looks like this:

AFTER

Multiply by 430 (the number of pages written). Repeat as needed. Revise again. Finish novel. Shorten new material. Revise the whole book one more time.

How’s your 2012 going?

4 Replies to “What I’ve been doing with my widdle self”

  1. Only been to Olmstead Point once, but that is one spectacular view. Trip over the Tioga Pass Road is a great drive. Amazing that they just closed it (finally) for the season.

  2. An even more adventurous trip by centaur 30 years after all road maintenance has stopped. 🙂

    They had little rain and a relatively mild winter this year. Last year they didn’t open the thing till July, I think.

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